Script Doctor Eric
Thank you for all the excellent loglines this week, sent to me via Twitter (@scriptdreric) and email ([email protected]
And the winner of Logline Friday for Friday, February 15, 2013 is…
John H!
No, not that John H.
No, not THAT John H.
THIS John H:
“Gang-Tackle” – A group of homeowners band together and challenge a neighbor gang to get off their turf while risking their houses in a winner-take-all football game.
This premise could be taken in a few different directions, but generally seems like a feel-good movie with a slight edge to it.
Congrats to John who wins notes on the first 5 pages of any script he wishes to send my way!
If you didn’t win this week, be sure to submit another logline this Friday. It can be the same one you submitted last week, but you may want to spruce it up a bit.
One way to learn how to write better loglines is to check out the List of Past Logline Friday Winners and see what those loglines have that yours doesn’t.
If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Seriously. And…
Onward!
-Eric
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