And the winner of everyone’s favorite Friday logline contest (Logline Friday) for February 1st, 2013, is…
Ronald’s logline for the script HIS NEW GIRLFRIEND:
She’s dating a girl for the first time and she’s never been happier. Little does she know, she’s really dating her “ex boyfriend” who got a really good sex change operation.
Woah, didn’t see that twist coming. Nice surprise! Sounds like it could be a fun, dark, indie comedy.
Especially HEDWIG. Man, I love that movie.
So, congrats Robert! The “F” obviously stands for “Fantastic logline writer.” Or something else…
If you didn’t win this week, you may want to take a look at the Past Logline Friday Winners and compare them to the logline you submitted.
Notice how the winning loglines are specific enough to entice a reader, and have some sort of hook about them? Do that!
Or at the very least, condense and revise, and submit your logline again this Friday!