Script Doctor Eric
And the winner of Logline Friday for Friday, July 23rd, 2010 is…
Stephanie Ogozaly! Stephanie’s winning logline:
@slo1987usan B Anthony: Dragon Slayer. History says in 1851 Susan B Anthony met a feminist that led her to activism…We say that in 1851, Susan B. Anthony met a dragon hunter that led her into a life and world of adventure.
Obviously there’s a little of Pride and Prejudice and Zombies in here, but with more of a family bent, this could be a humorous film for the parents AND the kids…and that’s a good demographic.
Stephanie wins free notes on the first 5 pages of ANY of her scripts. Congrats Stephanie!
If you didn’t win, feel free to submit the same logline next week – but you may want to rewrite it. Even if it doesn’t seem that way right now, I promise you can make it better.
Seriously.
And…
Onward!
-Eric
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